Just to give you a brief heads up about my book. My book is about this girl name Remmi who’s dream is to become an actress.She face challenges of sleeping with different kind of man that she don't know and doing other things she was never interested in doing or want to do.
if i had to chose a question on what to work on i will chose number one. Which asked me why the author Michelle Valentine wrote the book, what was her main point she was trying to put out to her readers.
In my opinion,she wrote this book for two reasons.One of the reasons to me is that she want to tell people like her readers that when you are trying to become someone in the future it wont be an easy ride. For example being an actress or something that is in the category of entertainment you will have to work really hard. you will do things that you will never think you will ever come across.
i also think the author is trying to let her reader know that being a black person that not rich and want to be successful is not easy. Not trying to say something wrong but most people know black women as people with bog booty and big boobs. So when a women like that is trying to be in something where some men think they can use them to get a little something they want.
For example in the book when remmi wanted to be in a video it didn't matter to nobody that when she was in the luda chris video she did good but all that matter was they wanted to get something they like before they give her something they want. her friend she went who she thought was ganna be there for her was not there when she need her. when she went in for the audition she did what the people told her to and she forgot about her friend. So the main point i wil say is that when you are trying to be successful because you wil face some challenges and it wont be easy.
i comment on this shit bruh about big booty and big boobs LOL!
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Thanks for your comment on my blog!
ReplyDeleteWhat I liked is how you had examples for your reasoning on why the author chose to write the book. I think this is the uestion you should expand on becaause you have good readons for it adn seem to understand well what is going on. Add a little more on the summary of the book abut what the character faces and how it affcts her.
Also, I have a uestio on the book: Does Remmi reall y want to be an actor or is it just that she like the life of an actor?
Okay, I like your post.
I like how you used examples to support your point, but it can be stronger if you use actual quotes from the book. Furthermore, you used "In my opinion...". It sounds like you are unsure of the purpose of the book yoruself. A stronger phrase would be "The purpose of this book is...".
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